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Post by Fate Rider Mon Mar 11, 2013 5:04 pm

- Primary Magic -

Name: Ark of Embodiment
Type: Lost Magic
Description: Ark of Embodiment magic is not only unique, but there is nothing else like it. It gives the user the ability to use their most powerful tool known to man, the brain, and use it to there benefits, and for the opponents down fall. All it requires is for the user to think. Think up something either big or small, then allows them to pull it out of there head. It can be used for anything the user wishes, let it be Offense, Defense, or even just for the users amusement. The Use can create almost anything, with limits of course, from animals, to plants, to elements, to even buildings and structures. Another great thing about this magic is, that the creations have no mind of there own. They merely do what the User wants them too. Weather or not the user likes them, however, they still take up a great deal of magical energy to admit.
Strengths:
- The User can summon almost anything (granted there is a spell for it)
- The User can create things that assist them in battle or out.
- The Creations can cause different types of damage.
Weaknesses:
- Takes up a lot of magic
- The more powerful the creation, the longer the cool down and the greater the amount of magic lost.
- must have a spell that allows the user to summon such a thing. Can not just make stuff up on the spot
- The greater the power of the summon, the longer the cool down.

- My Magic Skills -

D-rank:

C-rank:

B-rank:

A-rank:

S-rank:


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Rank: S-Rank
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Primary Magic: Arc of Embodiment

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Post by Fate Rider Mon Mar 11, 2013 8:27 pm

Complete! Finally!
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Post by Ganz Mon Mar 11, 2013 9:12 pm

I will go through your spells step by step now.

D-Rank Spells:

Snake Heaven:
-Every snake will be destroyed by 1 d-rank spell, not 1 c-rank and 3 d-ranks
-The poisoned person's magic is lowered by max 15%. They will feel a slight strain on the body, nothing more.

Mechanical Claws:
-What are the movement limitations? How far from her can the gloves be?

Jet Black Claw:
-In the description you have 10 feet but in strengths you have 15 feet
-Change it to 10 feet extension radius.

C-Rank Spells:

Sisters:
-Can only take 2 d-rank spells
-How far can the clones move away from her?

Black Rose Bombs:
-Again here, the dimensions lack range. How far can she throw the roses?
-If the user can get hit by the explosions, how big is the explosion radius?

Black Rose Chain:
-Again, movement limitations/dimensions
-How long do the chains reach?
-If the chains last only 1 post how does binding last two? Please explain.

B-Rank Spells:

Golden Shield of Midas:
-The shield can block 4 C-rank spells and 6 D-rank spells.
-Does she hold it or does it sack on the area in front of her with her hiding behind it?

A-Rank Spells:

The Great Bezerker, Hercules:
-He deals A-rank damage, can not kill a human
-Can not break multiple bones. Fractures and concussions are possible.
- 2 A-rank techniques and 4 B-rank techniques, 6 C-rank techniques and 8 D-rank techniques to destroy him.
-How are his movements limited? Not at all? Only has a certain realm he can move away from the user?
-I can recall a conversation with the owner about the cooldowns and durations, yet for the purpose of my grading I will propose the duration lowered to 5 and the cooldown to 8

Black Rose Garden:
-Make that a 5 meter radius
-I will recommend you raising the damage because I propose a lowering of the number of beams to once per post. You can raise the damage to B-rank damage then. And how fasts do the beams fire.
-Dimensions for the beams needed. How forceful? How long, wide, strong etc. Just letting them deal B-rank damage won't be enough.

S-Rank Spells:

Medusa:
-How fast can she attack with her claws and hair strands etc.?
-The 1 hit k.o. is insta denied. The looking into the eyes can stay but it is by no means a insta k.o. Can not work with that. You could change it to A-rank damage though that would be quite ineffective. I would rethink the ability.
-I propose a cooldown change to 6 posts duration and 9 post cooldown. If this was discussed with owner, then this does not fall under my authority.

Dance of the Black Petals:
-Dimensions on the Rose. Height, width of rose and petals?
-How wide is the tornado?

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Post by Fate Rider Mon Mar 11, 2013 9:57 pm

Ok, finished. TOOK ME FOREVER!!! but i finished lol
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Post by Ganz Mon Mar 11, 2013 10:05 pm

3 things:

In your Rose Garden you still have 5 blasts per post. Change.

Medusa just deals A-rank damage, does not make nerves explode.

Dance of the Petal: Dimensions of Rose, height and width
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Post by Fate Rider Mon Mar 11, 2013 10:09 pm

ok, edited Smile
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Post by Ganz Mon Mar 11, 2013 10:12 pm

Hereby I declare you as approved!

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